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November 2,支招柱澳洲 2023
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[2023/ 10/28] The城市 chart below shows the water levels in reservations in six cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.
【主体段分段】:按照时间分段
【开头段】
The bar chart compares six Australian cities in terms of water levels of reservoirs in October 2009 and October 2010 .
【概述段】
Overall, Brisbane had the highest water level of reservoir among all the cities in both years.Also, except the water level in Sydney, the figures in all the other five cities showed a rising trend.
思路要点:
- Brisbane的水库水位两年都最高
- 除了Sydney,其他城市的库水水位都上升
【Body 1】
In 2009, the water level in Brisbaneranked the topamong these cities(98%),followed bythe figure in Perth(80%) and that in Melbourne(78%).By contrast, the water level in Darwinwas the lowest(36%), which was roughlyhalf ofthe figure in Gold Coast.
思路要点:2009年
- Brisbane水位排第一,Perth和Melbourne分别排名第二、支招柱澳洲第三
- Darwin水位最低,小作大约是文I位变Gold Coast的一半
【Body 2】
In the subsequent year,there emerged a marginal growth by2% in the water levels of reservoirs in Brisbane, Perth and Darwin. The water levels in Melbourne and Gold Coastalsoexperienced an upward trend, with the figures rising considerably by 5%.By contrast, Sydney was the only city where the water level of reservoirdropped significantlyfrom 44% in 2009 to 40% in 2010.
思路要点:2010年
- Brisbane, Perth and Darwin的水位小幅度上升
- Melbourne和Gold Coast 的水位显著上升
-只有Sydney的水位显著下降